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Little Mouse Learns About Money | Little Mouse Learns — Sun, 10 Oct 2010 01:49:12 +0000

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Comment on Preview by Jenny Patterson

Jenny Patterson — Sat, 04 Sep 2010 02:08:01 +0000

Bravo! Succinct, clear, informative. A story children need to learn early, a story adults need to be reminded of. The illustrations are worthy of the story line, and the story line, a compliment to the illustrations. They work in concert to make the subtle point. Each sentence is not wordy, or repetitive in content. The opening takes the reader where you want us to go, without being preachy; the end clarifies the result of Little Mouses’ journey. If writing is your calling, take that leap of Faith and put pen to paper. I’m a published writer, and when we learn that words are our friend, that proper grammar, punctuation and spelling are key ingredients to the message, and not fluff or afterthoughts, then the world is open to our own glorious expression. By the way, Derick Page is my son, and asked me to read and comment. It was my pleasure.
Jenny Patterson

Comment on Preview by Derick A Page

Derick A Page — Fri, 03 Sep 2010 21:43:34 +0000

To Lillian Reese,
I find your story inspirational to children, it is a good story to learn from on what to know about money and how money can effect you in certain ways. I think you have something special to share with our children and how they can learn for this story. Lillian Reese thank you for sharing this story with us, I wish you all the best in your future in writing children stories.

Comment on Meet The Characters (Rufus) by Randy Peer

Randy Peer — Sun, 08 Aug 2010 21:03:10 +0000

Very creative and imaginative. It is easy to relate to.